Hey, this is pretty good! You took an epic song and made it more epic than it was before. I especially like the work you've done on the strings, making them sound extremely organic.
I don't think the BPM worked in favor of the saxophone VST you used for this song. I'd recommend either tailoring the track to the vsts you have (maybe by increasing the tempo or having a section where the saxophone can be quick) or finding a VST that can handle slower note lengths (like the sensual saxophone by embertone).
Overall though this is very epic and was a fun track to listen to.